I´m looking for a ghostwriter to rewrite a paranormal romance story.
The story is lacking in passion. I don´t feel both characters. The book is alright, but missing complexity and emotional depth. The end is too flat, no excitement and the sex scenes could be more intensive. The book feels rushed not many details and then all of sudden there are bad guys from the father’s past, which should be explained or the suspense part should somehow increase in the course of the story.
So the book has currently 15´000 words. In the end it shouldn´t have more than 20´000 words. I would pay you for reading the story once to get a feeling about what is missing taking my impressions above into consideration and for the rewriting part.
Thanks for bidding,